Friday, September 28, 2007

Journal Entry # 13

Write an academic paragraph. Try your best to give three reasons supporting the topic sentence. Don't forget to give examples and write a concluding sentence.Topic sentence: There are several reasons to eat fruits and vegetables.

There are several reasons to eat fruits and vegetables.

Nowadays people have lots of stress from work, family, or study, so keeping our body healthy is important. The easiest and most economic way is to eat more vegetable and fruits. Because it really has many advantage. First of all, vegetables protein is better than animal protein. The cholesterol from vegetables and fruits is less than meat. Second, it can get rid of constipation. Vegetables and fruits have rich fiber and it can improve digestive system. At last, eating more vegetables and fruits can balance PH value in our blood. The vitamin from vegetables and fruits can cause less change to get disease. In summary, vegetables and fruits have less cholesterol, more fiber, and lots of vitamin. Therefore, there are several reasons people need to eat more vegetables and fruits.

1 comment:

Maggie said...

"The vitamin from vegetables and fruits can cause less change to get disease."
Your paragraph is really good but you should use "chance" in that sentence.